THE HISTORY OF ALCHEMY
The practice of alchemy originated amongst the peoples of the vanished Fourth Continent. It was brought by the fleeing Thulhun to Machen and Maturin where it flourished in various cults and courts, supplanting the shamanistic and priestly traditions extant in those cultures. The Coven of the Sun, the Iron Cabal and the Golden Cabal are the three greatest alchemical traditions of the southern continents.
Alchemists, historically, have been powerful political forces no matter their location or disposition. The ability not only to raise and command the dead but to
Aligher makes use of alchemy only in the totemic binding of man and beast.
THE ALCHEMICAL SUBSTANCES
Almost every substance known to Man is readily transmutable by a capable alchemist. Notable substances include:
Iron
Silver
Wood
Marble
Water
Blood
Bone
Stone
Paper
Cloth
Steel
Bronze
Copper
Malachite
Dust
Hair
Obsidian is the only substance which cannot be transmuted. It is also inert as a reagent.
THE PRODUCTS
Some results achieved with alchemy are not reversible and do not in principle flow both ways. These are referred to as Products and include:
Chlorine
Sulfuric Acid
Oxygen
Carbon Dioxide
Mercury
Sulfur
Nitrogen
Hydrogen
THE REAGENTS
Charged by an alchemist's will, a reagent facilitates the transmutation of one alchemical substance into another. All substances are reagents.
THE FORBIDDEN SUBSTANCES AND REAGENTS
Transmutation of thought: Facilitated by gold. Thought is prohibited as a substance not because of its nature but because it responds only to gold, which is itself taboo. Any attempt at transmutation of thought results in an explosion of alchemical energy rendering everyone within a quarter mile irrevocably mad. It is fabled, but unproven, that the process can result in the alchemist gaining unspeakable knowledge.
Transmutation of age: Facilitated by the life's blood of an exsanguinated sacrifice. Forbidden for obvious reasons, and delivers diminishing returns.
Transmutation of memory: Facilitated by silver, the transmutation of memory divorces the transmuted party from reality and plunges them into another world. They lose their language and speak thereafter in a strange tongue undecipherable by Men. Eventually they become silent and then, undying, sit and turn to stone.
Transmutation of distance: Facilitated by iron. Transmutation of distance results in the collapse of distance as a concept within the area effected by the transmutation. Over time, if the transmutation is exercised repeatedly, the locale will collapse into an aleph, the confluence of many locations at one point.
The use of gold as a reagent is expressly forbidden by most or all alchemical covens. Historically, gold was used by various cults as a ceremonial reagent for its occasionally spectacular results. It is, notably, the only reagent capable of imparting life to inanimate objects. Common results of transmutation via gold include madness, explosion of alchemist, alchemical substance or both, destruction of the alchemist's soul or, in cases recorded apocryphally, the summoning of a demon.
Saturday, June 30, 2012
Friday, June 22, 2012
THE BANKER
Tomas Dutiful Boar, Senior Adjunct of
the Imperial Maturi Bank, sits alone on a soiled mat in his drafty
tent. He huddles beneath the quilt his wife Mara sewed for him
before his departure from Tsang, eyes red and nose running. The wind
howls like a lunatic along the Road of Dust, bringing with it the
Grand Ocean's stinging spray. The seabirds that nest on the dreary
span are screaming at the gale, raucous voices rifling the iron dawn.
Tomas has not slept at all. He has scarcely closed his eyes since
leaving Tsang two weeks ago, and now that Machen's sandy coast is in
sight, the Mountains of Madness looming like teeth over the Road, he
sleeps even less. Today the Legion will take the road to Soma, and
Tomas will ride with them, mocked, jeered at, or else ignored. Since
Sieur Lorelei's stunt in her war tent, her signature in blood, no one
in the camp takes Tomas seriously.
Outside the banker's tent the soldiers
are stirring, their galluses making inquisitive sounds as the grooms
saddle them for the day's ride. The dead, Tomas knows, stand ready
as well. They make no preparations because when night falls they do
not billet down. Instead they stand in ranks, those false men with
their golden eyes, spears in hand, shields at the ready, and they do
not move again until Maestro Longardeux orders them forward. They
fight naked like the ancient Thulhuns, lockstep warriors who kill
without remorse. Even thinking of them turns Tomas's stomach.
There comes a rap on the post beside
Tomas's tent flap. “Banker,” says Sieur Jocelin, Sieur Lorelei's
brute of a second. His outline hulks against the canvas wall. “We
march. Done sleeping?”
“Yes, yes,” says Tomas. He rises
from his chair. He will forgo shaving today, he decides as he crams
his second-best wig onto his stubbled head. Sieur Jocelin departs,
his shadow slipping away from the tent's rough wall. Tomas watches
him go as he dresses, retying his underrobe where his gut has popped
the straps. Mara badgers him to eat less, but he never listens. He
pulls on his robe, his culottes and hose, his traveling coat, and
finally his thick leather gloves. They hide his fat fingers
admirably well, he thinks, inspecting them as he steps outside into
the waning dark. The cold is fading fast so close to shore, but the
chill in the air is still enough to rattle his teeth.
Two glowering soldiers stand a little
ways off, waiting to break down his tent. Tomas ducks past them,
head down, already chilled by the salt breeze. One of the men
sniggers. Tomas blushes. The rest of the camp is moving, tents
packed into the wagons, cavaliers mounted, officers oiled and ready
to order men into death. Tomas's ancient manservant, Gregoire,
materializes at his elbow like a cadaverous shadow. “Maestro,”
the old man mumbles, brushing dust from Tomas's sleeve with his
arthritic fingers. “Will you take breakfast?”
“Hmm.” Tomas thinks guiltily of
Mara, of her stern mouth and icy glare. He swallows. “Octopus,
rice, the seaweed cakes if there's any left, warm wine, a dumpling,
no, two. And eggs.”
“Yes, maestro.” The old man makes
a slow, deliberate wai
with much creaking and puffing
before he straightens up and shuffles off in pursuit of breakfast.
Tomas's stomach
growls. His vision is bleary, his stubble greasy, unwashed. His
wig, unpowdered since the first week of travel, itches fiercely.
When will he go home again? So much is waiting for him there. The
junior partnership Director de Somme promised last autumn, his
parents settling grumpily into old age, his eldest son, Pascal,
turning three. And Mara. He's given up so much to please her, to
please her unpleasable father who had married her off for the Dutiful
Boar fortune, modest as it was. He loosens his collar. Thinking of
Maestro de Carnelia always upsets his lungs, and usually the rest of
him as well. With a sigh he sets off for the pickets, head bent
against the wind.
Tomas's mule,
Philippe, is waiting like a particularly patient boulder at the end
of the last picket row by the precipitous drop to the sea. The
swaybacked beast, unfazed by the surf crashing yards below, glances
sidelong at Tomas he approaches. He makes no move but to slowly,
deliberately continue chewing. He's already been saddled, though the
grooms have ignored his currying again. Tomas sighs, finds a brush
discarded next to a pat of fresh gallus manure, and sets to work
rubbing the mule down. If Philippe is moved by his master's
attention, he chooses not to display it. Gregoire's own mount, their
nameless baggage mule, looks on from further up the picket line with
what Tomas can only assume is murderous rage in its eyes.
Gregoire returns
with a loaded bowl and tin mug of wine just as Tomas is finishing up
Philippe's grooming. The banker wolfs down his breakfast as around
him the camp dissolves, peeling apart into its constituent persons
and canvas heaps, its supply wagons and chattering nemicolopteri
cages. Tomas hoists himself awkwardly onto Philippe as the
cavaliers form up in ranks further down the Road of Dust. Sieur
Lorelei rides up and down their lines, exhorting her soldiers to a
fast march. “We're nearly there, you rotten bastards,” she
shouts, turning her gallus. Seabirds rise in shrieking clouds from
the nameless sand-washed metal of the road. “The Hierophant's
armies, I've heard, are out of swords. Shall we bring them ours?”
The soldiers laugh and cheer, even those still disassembling the
camp.
The woman's
bloodlust sours Tomas's stomach. Is there nothing she does not wish
slain? He grips Philippe's reins tightly in his gloved hands as a
double line of armed soldiers marches past, boots clattering on the
road's impervious surface. Tomas wonders, not for the first time,
who built the Eight Great Roads that link the three continents and
the grave of the vanished fourth. What other wonders did they work
before the ruin of Thul and the end of humanity's golden age? His
research, the hundred little half-finished essays crammed into the
drawers of his desk at the bank, has led him no closer to an answer.
That the alchemists who built the Roads are long since dust is his
only certainty.
“The resource
reports, maestro,” husks Gregoire, now mounted. He hands Tomas a
sheaf of wrinkled papers covered in the illegible scrawl of the
legion quartermaster, Emil Standing Water. The man, like most of the
legion, is a southerner, but their shared ancestry has as yet yielded
no brotherly love. Instead Emil has sought to sabotage Tomas at
every turning. Stealing his inkpots, exchanging his
carefully-written letters with profanity-filled diatribes, always
positioning camp so that the latrines stand just beside Tomas's tent.
His current report
reads simply:
We have some of
some things and less of others. -Emil.
Tomas
sighs. He heels Philippe into motion as the rest of the legion
settles into its routine. In the distance Machen waits for them, a
kingdom of dust where the burnt-skinned nomads nest in cities built
by greater men. What will happen when they reach that barren
kingdom, Tomas wonders? He passes a hand over his face and heels
Philippe into motion, the resource report and Emil's useless letter
stuffed in his breast pocket.
Saturday, May 26, 2012
THE SORCERESS
Delfine le Fleur sits patiently in the
barber's chair as the fat, mustachioed man shaves the stubble from
her scalp. “Just a moment more, magistra,” says the barber, as
he does every few moments. “Just a moment more and we'll be quite
through.”
The Summer Arcade of the Golden
Cabal's temple in Tsang is a beautiful place to sit. Columns of
transmuted gold line a walkway open to the temple gardens where
alchemists wander alone or in groups along the labyrinthine paths
through twisting hedgerows and sand gardens, through stands of cherry
trees in roseate bloom. Dead allosaurs with golden collars around
their throats patrol the gardens, silent and sleek as death. They
pass like ghosts between the hedges, ignored by all but the Cabal's
newest acolytes who watch them in awe. Delfine watches one such
beast from the corner of her eye, admiring the play of muscles
beneath its leathery skin. The Iron Cabal makes soldiers and
drudges, but her order makes works of art.
“Just a moment more,” the barber
says, wetting his razor in a dish of rosewater. He draws the blade
along Delfine's scalp in a succession of quick, confident motions,
then pats the bare skin with a moistened towel to collect any hairs
left behind. With a flourish he removes the catch-cloth from around
her throat and steps back, smiling. “There we are.”
“Thank you, maestro,” says
Delfine. She stands, an imposing figure in her lavish alchemist's
gowns, and smiles at the barber. “My slave will arrange for your
payment as usual.”
“Magistra.” He wais
deeply.
The
temple pays the barber a healthy retainer, but Delfine likes to
remind him where the real power lies. She departs his little stand
in the shadow of the Summer Arcade and sets off across the garden
toward the low, red-tiled eaves of the Pagoda of Silent
Contemplation, the nine-tiered tower where Delfine and the other
master alchemists of the Cabal keep their workshops and come together
in council. Her postosuchus, Malvolio, detaches himself from the
shadows of the arcade and lopes after her, armored tail swinging. Acolytes and Adepts wai at
Delfine's passing and shrink back from Malvolio's jaws. The beast is
nearly twelve feet long, better than four feet tall at the shoulder,
and he weighs as much as five acolytes. Taming Malvolio was the work
of years, but what assassin could be paid enough to dare his wrath in
killing Delfine?
“This is a good
day, Malvolio,” says the alchemist. She pauses to admire a cherry
tree of particular beauty. Its blossoms drift in the air like snow
touched with the lightest dab of blood. “All of Tsang will know
the Cabal's greatness tonight. The City of Cities will gather us
close to her breast and the Lich King will be forgotten, just another
corpse shut up in a glorious mausoleum.”
Malvolio grunts,
ropes of drool dangling from his parted jaws. A passing lecturer
swallows and quickens his pace, darting glances over his shoulder at
the monstrous reptile.
In the
conclavorium of the Pagoda of Silent Contemplation three of the eight
Golden Councilors, the most senior amongst the Cabal's upper
echelons, are already deep in consultation when Delfine enters. She
watches them from the shadows of the doorway, Malvolio pressing up
against her side like a great scaled hound. Idly, she scratches the
reptile's armored snout as the Councilors, seated on woven mats,
debate amongst themselves.
“It would be too
gaudy,” says Mona le Croyel, the Cabal's withered Grand Archivist.
“Surely we can think of a more tasteful way?”
The
current Flesh Sculptor, a slender, handsome man of thirty or so,
makes a tsk-ing noise.
“We require gaudiness, Magistra. We need to make the whole
Shogunate stand up and take notice. And besides, our new creation
defies the laws of taste.”
“Here, here,”
says Delfine, clapping her hands as she steps into the dim light of
the teak-walled chamber. She descends the five steps to the Council
Floor, Malvolio keeping close beside her. The other Councilors watch
her with varying expressions. Mona le Croyel distrusts her, holds
their old grudge close and dear. The Flesh Sculptor is a grinning
cipher, talented certainly, but whether buffoon or serpent none has
yet determined. The third Councilor, Jean-Marie de Flambeux, High
Justice of the Cabal's internal courts, looks at Delfine with
undisguised contempt, the same expression he levels at anything less
than six hundred years old.
“Grand
Transmuter,” says the ancient Justice, a scowl deepening the myriad
lines that web his sagging features.
“Jean-Marie,”
says Delfine, wai-ing.
She takes a mat opposite the old man, who eyes Malvolio with
distrust as the postosuchus lowers himself to the floor. Delfine
lays her hand on the reptile's armored back. “He's quite tame, you
know.”
“We were
discussing the details of tonight's...display,” says the Flesh
Sculptor. “Mona and Jean-Marie feel that we ought to curb our
approach, rein in the fireworks until the Red Turbans are put down
and Marshal de Grande has returned to the city.”
“They return
within the week,” says Delfine. “I had a nemicopterus this morning from
my man with the legions. Nevertheless, we should press our point
tonight. Besides, the Raptor of Tsang will never be more unpopular
with Senate, King, or Shogun than he is now.”
“But he's just
put down the rebellion, if that's true,” sputtered Jean-Marie.
“Ah,” says the
Flesh Sculptor.
Delfine
raises one penciled eyebrow. “Precisely. His reputation has
become too great. Certain factions will expect an coup, certain
others will demand it, and those against whom it might be carried out
will become more paranoid with each passing day. We must be seen to
distance ourselves from the Marshal, and now is as good a time to
start as any.”
Mona le Croyel
looked scandalized. “The Marshal Louis has been our staunch ally!”
“Delfine is
right,” says the Flesh Sculptor. “He's finished.”
Delfine reaches
into her sleeve, produces a cigarillo on a long ash holder and lights
it. The tip of her left index finger is capped with flint to
transmute oxygen into flame. A little parlor trick. The alchemist
inhales clove-scented smoke. “We go through with tonight's
presentation.”
The other four
Councilors join them before dusk, but there is no debate, no
deliberation. They had worked tirelessly and in secret for better
than a month, and even Jean-Marie, Delfine is convinced, wishes only
to see the fruits of their long labor. He fears it, too, though, as
all old men fear what is new and terrible. It is only the little
children who know that change cannot be stopped. They leave the
Pagoda just after sunset, processing out into the gardens and then to
the Gate of Chains where dead iguanodons barded in the Cabal's black
and gold wait patiently, palanquins slung between them.
The city of Tsang
lies glittering in the shadow of the temple complex's hill. There
the soaring heights of the Palace of Regret where tonight the Cabals,
the Shogun, the Senate and the King will meet tonight, and there the
huge expanse of the Bay of Laughing Swine where a thousand ships bob
at anchor, beyond it the grim shadow of the Iron Citadel where their
sister Cabal holds sway. The city is a salt-smelling oasis, a
paradise of old stone crazed with moss, of alleys reeking of stagnant
water. It is an ancient city, its fanes and whorehouses of an age
with one another, both crumbling and full of lechers. Some say a
million souls dwell here where the air is hot and close, where the
sea threatens always to swamp shops, markets, slave pens, tenements
and villas. Mosquitoes buzz in the gathering gloom and their whine
is nearer than the million-fold lights of Tsang.
Delfine leaves
Malvolio with an uneasy stablehand and takes a palanquin with the
Flesh Sculptor. She ties the silk curtains shut as the great
reptiles lumber into motion, their passengers swaying between them.
Her skin prickles at the Flesh Sculptor's touch, at the warmth of his
lips on her throat and the stiffness of his short, thick cock pressed
against her thigh. She forces him back against the palanquin's
padded boards and lowers herself onto him, takes his member into her
vagina. He shudders, legs jerking, and his hands move beneath her
robes to the small of her back. In silence they make love as the
dead iguanodons bear them with ponderous tread down the long, winding
road to the city of Tsang.
In the streets of
Tsang there are crowds, and Delfine peers out at them in delight
through sweat-damp curtains while the Flesh Sculptor busies himself
between her legs. Shopkeepers, street-sweepers, lamplighters,
fullers, drovers and merchants stand alongside robed civil servants
and the occasional knight in lacquered bamboo armor. City guardsmen
occupy the corners of each street, and here and there Delfine sees
nobles, masked and robed or armored. Dead servants and soldiers are
everywhere. Delfine bites her lip, fighting the urge to scream as
the Flesh Sculptor's tongue touches, licks. “This is all going to
be ours,” she breathes.
The crowds part
for the Golden Cabal's procession. Parents hoist children up on
their shoulders to watch the dead saurians and their palanquins
lumber past in the light of the flickering streetlamps. Soon enough
they reach the outskirts of the palace precincts, the vast marble
plaza that fronts the Palace of Regret. The quetzalcoatli of the
Iron Cabal already roost on their shit-streaked landing towers,
stirrups dangling from their saddle girths. The huge pterosaurs flex
their wings at the approach of the iguanodons, unsettled by the dead
behemoths with their spiked thumbs and pressed-gold eyes. Delfine
deftly rearranges her underclothes, pushing the Flesh Sculptor away.
He wipes his mouth on his sleeve and slips out of the palanquin. She
follows, a picture of magisterial dignity.
The Palace of
Regret looms above them, its stone bulk cold and reverent in the dark
at the heart of Tsang. Paper lanterns drift through the air around
it like a swarm of sleepy fireflies, casting wild shadows over the
plaza and the palace walls. The rest of the Golden Council gathers
around Delfine, though the Flesh Sculptor has already begun to climb
the great stone steps toward the yawning entryway. “Come,” says
Delfine to the others. “We have an impression to make.”
The Golden Council
follows its Flesh Sculptor up the steps, ignoring the hundreds of
dead palace guards that watch them from alcoves carved into the
crumbling facade. A word of discord and the Lich King's bodyguard
will be upon them in their uncounted thousands. At the top of the
steps one of the Sixty-Six, the Lich's personal Cabal, awaits them,
naked but for the pointed black hood that obscures his face and
shoulders. Carious eyes, untempered by slave-making gold, stare out
at them through holes cut in that rough sackcloth. Delfine makes a
shallow wai in passing, though Jean-Marie neglects even this
brittle courtesy.
The entry hall
swallows them in its moldering vastness. It is a living thing, the
moist, dark throat of the Palace of Regret. Delfine counts her steps
as her sandals scuff the mosses and lichens that cling to the cracks
between uneven stones. One hundred. Two. Three, and now she can
glimpse the light at the end of the hall, the Flesh Sculptor
silhouetted against it. She smiles in the lessening gloom, the
whisper and clack of her fellow Councilors building all around her a
second palace made of echoes. Their Cabal is smaller than the Iron
order, but their prestige is greater, their history rich. They are
not sellswords. They are not slavers. They are the disciples of the
Monkey, the Third God, who was born in the heart of the sun and who
one day will return there to die.
This is their
hour.
The
Flesh Sculptor waits for Delfine near the hall's terminus, the very
mouth of the Hall of One Thousand Glorious Senators. He looks back
at her, his long hair brushing the collar of his embroidered gown.
The Hall is an amphitheater, hundreds of tiers of long stone benches
rising in a great half-circle around a deep pool where crocodilians
swim lazily in brackish water. The benches are not empty. The
nobles of Maturin, masked and swathed in their richest finery, sit or
stand in private boxes while the alchemists of the Iron Cabal,
bearded men and ropy, scarred women in robes of undyed cloth, their
silly alchemical bells sewn to their sleeves, are clustered together
on a round platform jutting out above the pit, a platform mirrored by
an empty twin on the pit's far side.
Opposite
the mouth where Delfine stands are the thrones of Shogun and Lich
King, the divided sovereigns of Maturin. The Shogun, Jacqueline le
Guerre, is an enormous woman, a wall of fat and muscle perpetually
straining the joints of her much-scarred armor. Her face is hawkish,
enormous hooked nose and beady eyes. Her big hands grip the arms of
her throne as though trying to strangle the polished oak. By
contrast the Lich King, Real de Thanatos, appears close to a second
death so attenuated has his ancient husk become. He is naked, his
wizened flesh exposed uncharitably for all to see from his wormlike
member to the trembling folds of his throat and his scabrous head with its wisps of yellowing hair.
The
rest of the hall is occupied by the corpses of the Dead Senate, the
three thousand sentient dead who have administrated Maturin since the
birth of its first Lich King after the fall of Thul. Their nude
multitudes only grow, a desiccated quorum of fading minds and
crumbling bodies. Delfine does not sneer, but contempt boils in her
stomach. These dead things have no place among the living. They
belong in chains, tilling fields and toiling in the sewers. Their
formaldehyde reek fills the air.
Iris
de Chymede, Grandmaster of War of the Iron Cabal, has the floor,
though he has ceased his speech and now looks at the Golden
Councilors with dislike printed plainly on his square, sunburned
face. The Hall has fallen silent, has become the mausoleum the
peasants mock it as.
“Proceed,
Grandmaster,” says the Shogun through gritted teeth. “Councilors,
to your post.”
Delfine
wais deeply to the
sovereigns and then sets off down the sweeping obsidian stair toward
the dais reserved for the Golden Council. Arriving late is part of
the plan, another way to build anticipation. Everyone in the Hall,
even as Grandmaster de Chymede resumes his dry speech on treaties
with the Floating Empire, on the movements of dead troops and the new
insults offered by the People's Holy Confederacy in Machen, thinks
now of nothing but the Golden Council. Delfine takes her place at
the platform rail and fixes de Chymede with a humorless stare. He
returns it, losing more and more of his audience as he stammers
through the end of his report.
The
dry, papery voice of Real de Thanatos cuts through de Chymede's
muttered conclusion. “The Apparati will hear now the words of the
Golden Cabal, who have requested one hour of our time.”
de
Chymede's brow furrows as he steps down from his lectern and Delfine
mounts hers. Who, after all, would request longer than a
quarter-hour of the Apparati's time? More than that and boredom is
certain. de Chymede's look of confusion becomes one of smug
confidence, certainty that his rivals are burying themselves beneath
their own legendary arrogance. Delfine ignores him. She directs her
words to the twin thrones, to Shogun and Lich King. “Our armies
have struggled for centuries against the great behemoths of the Machi
hordes. Their sauropods, their tyrannosaurs. Our natural philosophy
has proven itself insufficient to prize back from death the corpses
of the great inland saurians, and we are not a people given to
scratching in the dust with living beasts.”
The
dead senators, those who still deign to listen to words spoken by the
breathing, lean forward on their benches. Yellowing beards sweep the floor as the dead crane their necks with much popping and snapping of joints. They peer down at the bald alchemist before them. de Chymede's
smile widens. He believes his enemy about to confess to some great
failure. Surely even this brute knows the resources consumed by the
Golden Cabal, the loans taken out by its senior magi. He suspects
that they have gutted themselves. Delfine is hard-pressed to hide
her grin as the first tremor rocks the Hall.
Nobles
cease their quiet banter, abandon their flutes of wine and opium tea.
Their masked faces turn in the direction of the hall. Delfine keeps
her expression carefully neutral, though at her back she feels the
concentrated excitement of the other Councilors. The Flesh Sculptor
alone seems immune to the infectious glee, protected by his natural
air of cavalier dismissal. Delfine grips the lectern, fingers
whitening. “We have done what no other alchemists have dared to
try.”
The
Hall shakes again. Dust sifts down from the domed ceiling with its
gilt friezes, its murals of the Three. Delfine turns her back on the
Shogun, on the Lich King, on the Senate, the nobles, and the
sweating, discomfited de Chymede. It is a calculated risk, a breach
of etiquette meant to secure the new order of things. Delfine clasps
her hands behind her back, sharing a private look with her fellow
Councilors. No matter what they think of one another, now is their
moment. Tonight is their night. Again, the Hall trembles.
Delfine
looks back over her shoulder.“If you will deign to follow this
unworthy one?”
There
is an exodus, a crush of potentates shambling, shuffling, hustling
down the long stone throat of the Palace of Regret toward the distant
tympanic rumble of what approaches. Conversation bounces from the
walls, echoing and re-echoing until in blather secrecy re-emerges
from pure nonsense. Delfine's skin is aflame with anticipation. Her
hands tremble. She is the first out through the towering entryway,
first to see the great inanimate diplodocuses making their way up the
Dead Road from the sea. The behemoths, concealed in the harbor for
weeks now, still look fresh. Their slack grey skin is like expensive
leather, their whiplike tails still supple. Each of the three
saurians is over one hundred feet from long, blunt head to lashing
tail. Their slow tread shakes the earth. Their sides heave like
bellows, neat stitching concealing the immense hematological
batteries necessary to preserve their motive force. They tower over
shops and tenements. Their feet crack the cobbles.
The
populace cries out in a mixture of fear and awe. At Delfine's back
the men and women and dead of the Apparati are struck speechless, or
else gibbering to one another like madmen. Delfine turns back to
them, allowing herself at last a thin, knifelike smile. “One hour
for questions.”
Friday, May 25, 2012
THE LITTLE THIEF
In the shadow of Resplendent Orchid a
child must be quick, or else she is dead. There are slavers whose
agents hunt the alleys for those suitable to sell in Machen's flesh
marts, while the dregs go to the gulags in frozen Aligher. Packs of
feral raptors call the undercity home, and on some nights there are
worse things than slavers or saurians abroad in the dark.
Quick or dead. This is the Eel
Queen's Law, and all children who run in the streets of the city know
it by heart. Or else they are dead. Mari knows the law. She will
be ten soon, and she has not yet been caught. By Resplendent
Orchid's standards this is an accomplishment of great moment. She
has worked for thiefmasters, for tanners, for fullers and hadrosaur
stables, has stolen fruit, jewelry, meat, bread, coin, even candies
from the stalls of the Golden Cabal. She is small, light-fingered,
an acolyte from birth of the Eel Queen and her art. Now she sits in
a the crowded attic of a flophouse with a dozen other ragged
children, wondering what tempted her inside to listen to the woman in
yellow.
The Woman is young, ten or eleven
years older than Mari at the most, and she is so pale she looks like
the invalids who beg outside the temples at the center of town. Blue
veins run like rivers beneath her papery skin, surround her yellow
eyes like the fractured shadow of a noblewoman's mask. Her hair is
long and black, pooling on the floor around her, and bells made of
many metals adorn her trailing sleeves. Kneeling before the
children, light from the window at her back breaking over her, she
looks like a consumptive angel. She makes a slow, deliberate wai,
and Mari echoes it at once. It is always best to be polite with
alchemists.
Once, she has heard, a Grandmaster of the Iron Cabal
turned his boy-whore into salt for spitting on his slippers.
“Welcome,”
says the woman in yellow.
Mari says nothing,
and neither do the other children. They all know the laws. Never
speak first, never steal from a thief, never flaunt your take. The
list goes on. She does not speak; she listens.
The woman in
yellow laces her fingers together, the bells on her sleeves jingling.
“Who knows who rules your city from the great fortress on the
hill?”
“Claude de
Scorier,” says some idiot, a gaunt boy with a harelip. “He lives
in Resplendent Orchid with his sons.”
The woman smiles a
thin, sharp smile like a knife's edge. “Correct. How would you
like to own everything that Claude de Scorier owns?”
The smell of greed
is sharp in the air. Mari feels it, too, the forbidden goal of
wealth, real wealth and not just cold survival. She knows better
than to trust it, though, and she swallows her lust. There is
nothing but betrayal behind smiles, nothing but disappointment behind
promises. If you wanted something, you had to take it yourself.
“He sleeps on
silken sheets,” says the woman. She has her audience in the palms
of her pale, slim hands. She knows it. “His galluses eat better
than you ever have. How much injustice have you choked down since
your births? How much more will be force-fed to you?” She reaches
into her sleeve and produces a flat obsidian coin impressed with the
Shogun's glowering visage. A koku. Enough money to buy food for two
months. More money than any child in the room has ever held at once,
and certainly more than any of them has ever earned through hard
labor.
“What do you
want?” says another child, a squat, flat-faced girl with shrewd
eyes and scars on the backs of her hands. Mari thinks she has seen
her before, out on the streets some night by the Green Kitchens or
begging in the Plaza of Contempt.
“I want
nothing,” says the woman in yellow, “but the Hollow God desires
all, and it is Their will I serve. Tell me, will you help me kill
your Daimyo?”
de Scorier has
knights at his command, swaggering bullies with ko-flags
displaying their made-up ancestries to the whole world. He has the
city guard, rough men and women paid just little enough that they
must extort and brutalize everyone beneath them. Worst of all,
though, he has the Sad Men. de Scorier is not to be toyed with,
especially not by half-starved children. Still, Mari is tempted.
The room waits, holding its breath. Mari bites her lip. What to do,
what to do.
“I will,” says
the boy with the harelip. His voice is a drawn-out snivel, wet and
cringing.
The others join
in, each clamoring to be heard above the others, all proclaiming
their skills as hardened killers. Mari watches in silent disgust.
She knows the other children are lying, and even as the woman in
yellow explains her brazen plan she is caught up in their twitching
faces, their covetous eyes and the flush in their gaunt cheeks. Do
they understand nothing? Soon they're leaving, filing out through
the narrow door, coins clutched fast in their sweaty palms. Mari
rises and moves to follow, eager to leave the stuffy attic and its
strange inhabitant.
The woman's voice
freezes Mari where she stands. “Wait, child.”
Mari looks back at
the woman, still kneeling in the light that pours in through the
dusty window. “Magistra?” she says, her throat suddenly dry.
“Most of them
will take my coin and try to sell me to the city guard,” says the
woman in yellow. She seems unconcerned. The footsteps of the other
children are already retreating down the winding stair, heralded by
creaks and groans. “Not you. Why?”
Mari swallows.
“The guards don't listen to children.”
“Still, you
might have had the coin.”
“Where would I
spend it? The merchants would call me a thief.”
The woman nods.
She runs a hand through her long black hair. “Yes. Many of the
others will die. You knew my gift was poisoned.”
“Poisoned?”
Mari trembles, thinking of how she nearly took the coin.
“Figuratively.
What urchin could have a koku who had not stolen it?”
Mari says nothing.
The woman's pale yellow eyes, the color of piss or cornflowers,
frighten her. She wants to go, to run back to the streets and see if
Ugly Ursula has work for her in the stables behind her inn, the Red
Dimetrodon. Still, she does not move.
“The rest are
chaff,” says the woman in yellow. “You may be worth something.
Help me and I can promise an acolyte's place for you in the Iron
Cabal.”
Mari's chest
tightens. The Iron Cabal, those sellers of slaves and soldiers,
beholden not even to the Shogun but only to the Lich King and the
Dead Senate. It is said that the alchemists of the Iron Cabal give
up their souls when they take up their posts, that they wield powers
no other alchemist could dream of. In the woman's offer is a
lifetime of, if not ease, then at least security. Privilege. Power.
Mari swallows, wipes her damp palms on her trousers. “What do you
want? Really?”
The woman in
yellow smiles, showing her teeth this time. “Something beautiful.”
Saturday, March 31, 2012
THE KNIGHT
Sieur Lorelei
Dancing Crane, vassal of the Daimyo de Ponsier and commander of the
ninth senatorial legion, rides north with her men along the Road of
Dust, the indestructible bridge that joins Machen to Maturin. The
great track, raised in centuries past by the mighty alchemists of
long-lost Thul, is a marvel beyond mortal reckoning. It is made of
some stark black metal, a single unimaginable length transmuted from
water, and it cannot be transmuted or destroyed by any weapon known
to man. It has borne the weight of armies, Lorelei knows, and more
than one war has been decided on its span. Not this war, though.
No, this war lies in the west of Machen, that dusty, sanctimonious
neighbor to lush Maturin. Machen with its cruel religion, its stern
god and hard-eyed warriors. Rocking in the saddle, her gallus's
spine shifting beneath her sore arse, Lorelei is sure that if her
luck holds to its course she'll be buried in an unmarked grave
somewhere in fucking Machen.
The banker
interrupts her bad mood. He looks like a toad, like a storyteller's
idea of a banker plucked from the pages of a whorehouse scroll. He
clears his throat, adjusts his wig with fingers that must be modeled
on short, fat sausages. He rides a mule, leaving him a dwarf among
the legion's gallus-mounted knights and cavaliers. “Sieur,” he
says in his whistling, nasal tone, “I must remind you that my
employers specified an arrival date which, according to my most
recent calculations, we will miss by fully three days.”
“Yes,” says
Lorelei. She is irritable in the heat, sweating under the weight of
her lacquered bamboo armor. The ko-flags jutting from her
shoulders hang limp in the dead, salt-stinking air.
“Sieur?”
“I said yes,
maestro. Yes, we're going to be late. Yes, it's unavoidable. Yes,
your ledger-scribbling masters are going to wet themselves with
anger. What would you like me to do about it?”
The little man's
round cheeks redden. “I fail to see-”
“Can't march
faster,” grunts Jocelin Summer Pollen, Lorelei's hulking
second-in-command. He scratches at his stubbled chin. “Not enough
water.”
Lorelei spits
neatly through the gap between her front teeth. “My verbose
colleague's summation suffices. This isn't the Road of Tears, or the
Broken Road. There's no source of fresh water between here and
Machen except for our alchemists, and they can only make so much. If
we run the galluses, they'll die, and then we will. So, we walk.”
The banker's mouth
opens, closes, opens again. He settles on a scowl and, flipping open
his ledger with saddle-horn as writing stand, begins to scribble
furiously. Lorelei imagines kicking him in the side of the head,
imagines him pitching off the edge of the Road of Dust, down that
sheer ten-foot cliff of nameless metal and into the hungry sea where
mosasaurs wait to pick the flesh from the bones of the clumsy, the
unlucky, the suicidal.
Not an
unattractive option after a week on the Road of Dust. The track is
monotonous, an endless stretch of black. Its width and appearance
are both uniform, its surface uninterrupted. Maturin is no longer
visible behind the legion, and it will be weeks yet before Machen
appears on the horizon. The Daimyo, curse his mother's fertile gash,
could have given command of the exploratory expedition to any legion,
to any of his hundred knights. And he chose Lorelei.
Scowling, the
knight heels her mount forward. The gallus, a strapping bay gelding
she has not yet bothered to name, squawks in indignation and quickens
its pace. Jocelin follows, keeping pace with the easy skill of a
natural cavalier. Lorelei remembers the Daimyo's masked face as they
spoke in his solar, remembers his wrinkled hands on the stem of his
wineglass and the wig-powder dusting his shoulders. Her hands
tighten on her gallus's reins. “Why in the name of the Hollow God are we out here shilling for a Machi warlord?”
“Can't break his
word,” says Jocelin. He spits neatly, efficiently. “Made a
deal.”
Lorelei grinds her
teeth. “Ahmad Levi.”
Jocelin grunts in
the affirmative. He removes his wig to pat his scalp dry with a
kerchief. “Land. Money. Troops.”
“Gods,” adds
Lorelei. The new temple complex in Tsang is part of the pact between
Daimyo and Shah. Two temples, one of marble, the other of obsidian,
linked by a bridge of gold that stretches across the river Melieur.
The shrines of the Divided Gods are greater now than the Thousand
Temples of Maturin's pantheon. Lorelei dislikes them, those stark
bastions of an unfamiliar faith with their maskless priests, their
echoing halls and mumbling congregations. She prefers the heat and
incense of the old fanes, the aging priest-whores of the Bloody Lady
with their rheumy eyes and wrinkled mouths. She likes the warm,
coppery smell of iguanodon blood on the low stone altar.
“Banker,” says
Jocelin, jerking his chin back over his shoulder.
Lorelei looks back
to see the little toad waving a message cylinder at her
quartermaster, Emil, who keeps the legion's tiny nemicolopteri, the
little pterosaurs they use to send messages back to the mainland.
Emil is studiously ignoring the banker, his nemis shrieking in their
cages slung over the flanks of his lumbering styracosaurus. Lorelei
smiles at the sight of the banker's beet-red face, but sooner or
later she'll have to order Emil to attend to the odious creature.
The bank is too important to de Ponsier for her to get away with
flouting their agent's authority completely.
Jocelin spits
again. “Something has to be done.” For him, an expansive
speech.
“I suppose it
will,” says Lorelei, still watching the banker as he begins to
shout at the unresponsive Emil.
That night they
make camp on the bare road, legion tents weighted down against the
fierce salt-smelling wind, galluses picketed well away from the
precipitous cliffs where sometimes plesiosaurs lurk in wait, long
necks craning up in search of unwary prey. Lorelei holds council
with her high officers. Sieur Jocelin, Sieur Raymonde, Sieur Elaine
and Maestro Longardeux of the Iron Cabal, accompanied by his servants
with their eyes of gold and their loose grey skin. The banker
insists on sitting in, watching them through his spectacles over the
edge of his notebook. She does her best to ignore him as she briefs
her staff for the dozenth time on their mission west: ride to the aid
of Levi's upstart kingdom, rendezvous with his forces at Soma and
make sure that when Levi plopped his arse into the Hierophant's
throne in Leng that he knew whose swords had put him there.
The banker's dry,
forced cough draws all eyes. Lorelei turns from her maps to stare at
the little man as he adjusts his cravat and clears his throat.
“Yes?” she says tersely.
“What if Lord
Levi has abandoned Soma when we reach it?”
Jocelin taps the
map with an armored finger. “Find him in the field.”
“Sieur Summer
Pollen is correct,” says Lorelei. “Now, as to the matter of the
cannon. Maestro, when would be the ideal time to convert our wooden
castings?”
“Surely as late
as possible, Sieur,” says the pallid alchemist. He is an
odd-looking man with his watery eyes and his bald, wigless head. He
wears lacquered bamboo armor dyed grey and hung with little iron
fetishes, the emblems of his order, obscure tokens of his training.
He tents his gauntleted fingers beneath his chin. “I can transmute
the full battery in two days, with notice.”
“When we reach
the mainland, then,” said Lorelei, satisfied. The Cabal's fees are
outrageous, but she isn't the one paying them.
“Ahem.”
Lorelei suppresses
with difficulty the urge to draw her knife and fling it at the
banker's smug, fat face. “What is it?” she grates through bared
teeth.
“I require your
signature, sieur,” the banker says through an iron smile. “These
expense reports and estimate sheets, which must be returned to the
home office by week's end.”
Lorelei puts both
hands on the table, just to take the knife at her belt out of the
equation. “Send your messages then. I'll put my name on them,
sign them with a kiss, spritz perfume on the parchment, if you'll
just leave them with my aide and shut up about it.”
The banker blinks,
taken aback, and then his lumpish face slides back into its usual
infuriating placidity. “I think now would be best.” He proffers
a sheaf of parchment paper crammed with his miniscule writing. “At
the bottom, sieur.”
Sieur Elaine, a
battle-scarred veteran of the first years of the Red Turban
Rebellion, snorts derisively. She slaps the table. “This is a
circus. Where is your shul, money-changer?”
“Sign,” says
the banker, eyes narrowing.
Lorelei
straightens up, ears ringing. It took sixteen years to claw her way
to legion commander. Sixteen years of infighting, backstabbing,
scheming and fucking to get where she is now. Her hand moves to the
knife's hilt. She draws it, smiles at the fear in the banker's eyes,
the involuntary widening. She draws the knife's point down the pad
of her thumb and, crossing the tent in two swift strides, presses her
bloody digit to the sheet. Three terse lines and her name is signed.
Lo for ambition, re for water, lei for victory.
“Send that home,” she snarls in the banker's bloodless face, and
then she throws the papers into his lap and stalks out of the tent
into the cool, windy night, leaving the banker and her officers to
stare. Elaine is laughing heartily.
A legion messenger
approaches her as she nears her tent. “Sieur,” says the
smooth-cheeked young boy, saluting. “A messenger from the Shah
awaits you in your tent.”
Lorelei raises an
eyebrow. “A message?”
“A messenger,
sieur,” says the boy.
“Take me to
him.”
He is near the
picket lines, a handsome Machi man dressed in riding leathers. There
are lines at the corners of his haunted eyes, but he cannot be more
than thirty, perhaps thirty-five. He is laving his gallus's heaving
flanks, petting the saurian's serpentine neck as it pants in
exhaustion. “I rode a long time to reach you, Sieur Dancing
Crane.”
“You might have
sent a pterosaur.”
The man shrugs,
still tending to his mount. “The Shah prefers a personal touch.
Consider me his Hand.” He turns from the spent gallus, wringing
dirty water from the cloth in his scarred hands. “I am here at his
request to appraise you of the situation in Machen.”
“The war, you
mean.”
The Hand smiles
sadly. “Yes,” he says, water dripping from his fingers. “That,
and other things.”
Sunday, February 26, 2012
THE MASQUER
Alonzo de Carnelia's father had always said, before his death in the streets of White Starling City, that the fortunes of the great of Maturin were sculpted by the masquers of Tsang. Now, bent nearly double over a gold-inlaid porcelain mask commissioned by the second son of the Daimyo de Ponsier with a brush in one hand and a needle in the other, Alonzo understands what his father meant. The mask, a piece as fine as any he had ever crafted, conveys in the lines of its long, noble features worldliness, power and indomitable charisma. It is the face of a king surveying his realm from the battlements of his castle. How could it not fail to change the hearts of those who saw it, if only in the slightest of degrees? What events might then ripple from that tiny alteration of some unknown person's thoughtless perception?
All great things come from moments of perception stacked one upon the other, combining to create a portrait in rough strokes. Alonzo reaches for his best quill and begins to ink the mask's tiny beauty mark, a little blemish purposefully inserted beneath the left eye-hole. Beside his workbench his oviraptor, Astora, preens her blue-green tailfeathers with special care. The cobbler's cock, Lepidus, has been prowling the alley behind the shop. Alonzo reminds himself to check the locks so that the bastard won't get inside some night and saddle him with a new brood of unmanageable hatchlings. He has enough on his mind with his daughter's marriage to the toad in shambles.
“The Daimyo's son will be well pleased with this,” says Alonzo to Astora. He speaks to her often when he works.
It is past dark when the mask is finally done. Alonzo allows himself to slump back in his craftsman's chair, the tension in his shoulders slowly fading. Outside the lamplighters move down the narrow streets of the Woven Quarter, stilts click-click-clicking against the cobbles as they light the whale-oil lamps that hang on short chains from the iron lampposts. Alonzo watches one of the lamplighters pass by the window of his workshop. A girl in roughspun, skinny legs strapped to long oaken stilts. She looks like an insect creeping down the street, weaving with expert care between the milling men and women of the crowd. The Street of Masks is busy night and day, for men always need new faces. They tire of their old ones so quickly.
“Papa.”
Alonzo turns to the stairwell, but it is empty. He passes a hand over his face, thinking that he should shave in the morning before the Daimyo son's stewards arrive to collect their liege's order. It would not do to meet women of such status in a state of discomposure. If he is to marry again it will be from the ranks of the stewards that he will choose a wife. Now he sits in his workshop, a bedraggled craftsman nearing fifty in his dressing robe and sandals. He thinks of the children he fathered and lost, of Lani and Mieli, his wives who had died in the Shogun's coronation riots at White Starling City. So many died, that day. He rises, pours himself a glass of honey-wine and drinks it alone in the dusty workshop. Another glass sees him to his bed.
He shaves in the early morning, just past sunrise, and cooks himself a breakfast of peppers, squid, and eggs. He dresses in his best black craftsman's robes, lights incense in the shopfront beneath the altar of the Monkey, and dons his best wig. Astora feasts on half-rotten iguanodon steak in the workshop as Alonzo opens the shop's glass doors, doors that cost him a small fortune in fees to the alchemists of the Golden Cabal. Smells waft into the shop along with the morning heat. Dust, fried meat, flowers, sweat, dung, a hundred traces of perfume from the Street of Musk. The masks on their display stands glitter in the pale light, shaded by the palms that nod somnolent over the quiet streets. In an hour they will be filled to the brim by commerce, by the weavers who hawk their silk and the clothiers trying to catch the eyes of the nobility.
Now only the dead walk the streets. They cart away the dung left by beasts of burden, sweep the alleyways for garbage, shuffle dead-eyed through the dust. Alonzo watches them from the doorway of his shop. Another man of Alonzo's means might have bought a dead slave's contract from the Iron Cabal, but he finds their golden stares disturbing. He does his own work at his own pace, and because it is the finest in the city there are none who complain. Even some among the Dead Senate wear his masks. Last season the Shogun's sister bought one, a delicate work of spun sugar glazed with alchemical resin, for the Spring Revels at the Palace of Memory. The fame won by a visit from Lasciel's stewards alone would feed a dozen masquers for a decade. Still, Alonzo is not a man to rest on his accomplishments. Each day he labors nine hours on new work, fresh designs. Incomplete upon his workbench is an allosaur-mask of surpassing beauty. In glass display cases, another fortune spent on the precious substance, sit scores of others. Warlike, demonic, adoring, penitent, absolved.
A face for every occasion.
The stewards of the Daimyo's son arrive at the appointed hour, six women wearing their master's polished face and long robes of blue silk. The dead have gone, replaced by the babble and warmth of the living. Alonzo meets the stewards at the door, taking just long enough in his ritual courtesies to show his neighbors and competitors who honors him with patronage, and then ushers his guests inside. The mask is brought forth and presented for consideration. The shortest of the women turns it over in her slender hands. “This is fine work, Maestro de Carnelia,” she says, running a thumb along the curve of a gilt cheekbone. “Truly, you are without equal in your field.”
“My father taught me well, magistra,” says the masquer. “Please, allow me to prepare the mask for transport. Dust would aggravate the varnish.”
The woman hands back the precious piece of artifice and Alonzo wraps it carefully in velvet before placing it inside a flat brown box of treated oak. The women seat themselves on tatami mats in his receiving room and he closes the shop's doors and serves coffee in the gathering heat. Astora watches from the shadows, leery of so many strangers. The women discuss payment with Alonzo as they drink their coffee, exclaiming over its quality, over the porcelain, over the patterns woven into his tatami mats. The shortest, who must be their steward superior, takes the lead.
The woman sips milk-lightened coffee through a sieve in her mask. “My master, the valiant and handsome Baptiste of the Great House of de Ponsier, is prepared to offer sixty-six koku.”
“His Purity overestimates my shul,” says Alonzo, setting down his cup and gazing at it in a show of humility. “I would be overwhelmed by even so much as thirty-one.”
It isn't about the money. Alonzo has all the money he needs, all the money he'll ever need. This is about favors, about forcing the Daimyo's son to underpay. Accepting low fees improves a craftsman's shul, increases his standing in the local courts, and betters his prospects for a marriage. Alonzo inspects the women before him even as they haggle, weaving together along the careful tight-rope of prices that flirt with offensively low and degradingly high. Three of the six are too old for childbearing, but the steward superior and two others look suitable. Broad hips, narrow shoulders, throats smooth and hands unwrinkled by age.
“Fifty-nine koku,” says the steward superior.
“Thirty-five,” says Alonzo, appraising the woman's breasts. They look firm. Not too big.
“Fifty, with the promise of patronage by the Daimyo's house guardsmen.”
“I am unworthy of such a gift. Please, allow a poor old man to save face! Thirty-eight.”
A moment passes. The steward superior sets her porcelain cup down on its saucer with a fragile clink. Behind her mask, sculpted in Baptiste's handsome image, blue eyes narrow in consideration. In the corner of the room Astora chirps and clicks her beak.
“Forty,” the woman says.
Alonzo wais more deeply than protocol requires. The steward superior, bound by the more rigid rules of service to her master, cannot equal his obeisance. She rises and the others follow suit. Alonzo sees them to the door. His hand lingers on the steward superior's as he surrenders the mask in its velvet-lined box. Their eyes meet, and he sees that his intent is understood. She nods. They depart. Alonzo locks the door. It is not yet noon, but he has finished his business for the day. Shutters drawn he removes his wig, unclasps his robe and sinks into a chair. Astora joins him, nuzzling his palm as he drinks the dregs from the biggin he used to brew the morning's coffee. He scratches the oviraptor behind her crest, suddenly tired of the game he has played in his little shop for so many years.
What does it matter if he marries again, or if his new wives bring him children? He will be dead, ground down by the weight of years, before they grow. They lack the time to replace what he has lost, or to undo the necessary sham of Mara's marriage to the southern banker, that poem-named preener with his perfumes and his powders. Alonzo rubs his chin, resolves to drink no wine, then rises and pours himself a glass. It is the city's finest transmuted vintage, cast from pure agate into liquor by the masters of the Golden Cabal. He drinks it slowly, savoring the deaths of his memories, the decay of his regrets.
Another glass sees him to his bed.
Metamorphosis
This blog has been a considerable project from day one onward. It's been dry for months, obviously, but that's only because it's been changing and I've had to change with it. When I started Godhead, it was a fantasy novel. That much was obvious to myself and, I hope, to the reader as well. It remained a fantasy novel throughout its first volume. There were wizards, soldiers, world-weary noblemen. Hidden skills were learned, quests begun, conflicts established, protagonists apprenticed to mysterious masters.
Volume two isn't like that. It's given me pause up until now, and while I've got a small backlog I haven't really plunged into the narrative yet. By nature the story's something of a mess, which makes it particularly difficult to change gears. Nevertheless, I've come to accept that I'm no longer really writing fantasy(even though I totally am). What I'm doing is something between love story and horror novel.
Do you know what horror is? It's fantasy without a mentor. When the Nazgul come riding into the Shire on their black horses there's no Gandalf to spirit the Hobbits away, no Aragorn to lead them through the wilderness. There's no Galadriel, no Elrond. Just Sauron, and Denethor going mad in his tower. In horror Voldemort's horcruxes are pebbles at the bottom of the sea and expelliarmus doesn't save the day because there was no Dumbledore to shield Harry through his childhood.
Anyway, keep your eyes peeled. We'll be getting back on schedule very soon.
And now, for something completely different...
Volume two isn't like that. It's given me pause up until now, and while I've got a small backlog I haven't really plunged into the narrative yet. By nature the story's something of a mess, which makes it particularly difficult to change gears. Nevertheless, I've come to accept that I'm no longer really writing fantasy(even though I totally am). What I'm doing is something between love story and horror novel.
Do you know what horror is? It's fantasy without a mentor. When the Nazgul come riding into the Shire on their black horses there's no Gandalf to spirit the Hobbits away, no Aragorn to lead them through the wilderness. There's no Galadriel, no Elrond. Just Sauron, and Denethor going mad in his tower. In horror Voldemort's horcruxes are pebbles at the bottom of the sea and expelliarmus doesn't save the day because there was no Dumbledore to shield Harry through his childhood.
Anyway, keep your eyes peeled. We'll be getting back on schedule very soon.
And now, for something completely different...
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